Aug. 18th, 2007

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Inspired by Josh Langhoff, I've decided to go slightly more technical than I did in my column. Here again are the opening lines to "Love Me For Me":

It's been three days
You come around here like you know me
Your stuff at my place
Next thing you know you'll be using my toothpaste

What I said about the rhythm and singing was "'It's been' [pause] 'three days,' these body shots going bam-bam [pause] bam-bam; 'you come around here like you know me,' a flurry of quick jabs." But what I'll point you to here is that the quick jabs are mostly stressed syllables, and the ending of the second and fourth lines are a close match: "like you know me" is four consecutive stressed syllables; "using my toothpaste" is four stressed syllables out of five.

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