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Frank Kogan ([personal profile] koganbot) wrote2013-06-11 06:23 am

Black Tinkerbell

New ChoColat single, "Black Tinkerbell," similar to their previous three in that there's a touch of mid-Eastern-by-way-of-Spain-and-Africa quasi-freestyle mournfulness,* and all four singers get time in the spotlight. Song provides no opportunity for an aching Melanie** wail à la the "I want it all, all or nothing" in "I Like It." But she gives us a nice emotive brushstroke at the end of the middle eight. And the other three are catching up to her in sounding forceful and assured. Track doesn't earworm me the way "One More Day" and "I Like It" did, though maybe it's going more for a steady mood than for hooks.



What I mean by "freestyle" is more than one thing (see tag). ChoColat lean towards the passionate NY style, rather than the poppier Miami. And I wish the writers and arrangers for ChoColat would jump into the style whole hog, clear up space for vocal passion and hop up the beats and see what happens, e.g. (1989):

Cynthia "Change On Me"


*Provided by songwriters from Britain, Norway, and America, respectively, on singles 1 through 3. I don't know yet who wrote "Black Tinkerbell." [UPDATE: But David Frazer does. It's Kim Eui Sung of the band Bring The Noiz, and this is his/her first commercial song, or idol song, or something.]

**Me being prescient sixteen months ago:

http://koganbot.livejournal.com/287310.html

[identity profile] davidfrazer.livejournal.com 2013-06-11 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
pop!gasa has translated the lyrics to Black Tinkerbell:



I love you, I I wanna be with you
I love you, I

Don’t you see the childish me in your eyes?
Is love only possible when you’ve prepared for it when you’re young?
I’m too small for you and today, I really do seem small
To me, who is so small, even your love is small

Look at me next to you
I’m looking at you like this
My love may be short but
More than anything else, I live for you

Black Tinkerbell, I love you every day as I linger next to you
Black Tinkerbell, look at my choked up love because of you, my Peter Pan

I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you

How is her big love?
Even if you tell me, I wouldn’t know because I’m small
Is her love bigger than the times we had together?
Probably, because I’m too small

One can protect love with effort
But one can’t make love with effort
Before she came along
You’ve never been like this to me (never been like this)

Black Tinkerbell, I love you every day as I linger next to you
Black Tinkerbell, look at my choked up love because of you, my Peter Pan

I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you

My small wings can’t cover you
But her big smile covers you
After she came along, I became second
What are you going to do with me? Please love me

Black Tinkerbell, I love you every day as I linger next to you
Black Tinkerbell, look at my choked up love because of you, my Peter Pan

I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
I can’t leave, can’t leave, can’t leave you
Edited 2013-06-11 18:40 (UTC)