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Frank Kogan ([personal profile] koganbot) wrote2009-12-09 11:47 am
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Winter haiku

Window frozen stiff
Need to push frame hard to shut
[line deleted 'cause would be too utterly gruesome for lovers of fingers]

[identity profile] skyecaptain.livejournal.com 2009-12-09 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm thinking of earlier Britney Spears songs than you are, before being very drunk was much of an option. And actually I think I'm conflating this memory (c. 2000, or maybe '99, of me hanging out the back of a station wagon as it rolled through my neighborhood, admiring my dangling feet) with a different song, that Train "Drops of Jupiter" song.

[identity profile] skyecaptain.livejournal.com 2009-12-09 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Which doesn't change the fact that your haiku is better than mine.

[identity profile] edgeofwhatever.livejournal.com 2009-12-09 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, going back earlier:

Feel inferior:
long-legged Delia's models
and Britney Spears songs.